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The streetlights pass by in a haze one after the next
Like military drones standing reluctantly in line preparing to salute
My eyes are glued to the road yet they reflect nothing but a hollow void;
A seemingly more desirable destination than my own chamber of dread
I'm miles away in that bastard land of make-believe
Where I won't have to drink to numb the pain corroding my heart
Won't have to sedate my pounding brain and crumbling sense of self
A place where the torment just sort of...
..drifts away with the burning clouds at sunset
Then all too quickly the sound of metal crushing, twisting, contorting
Pain and despair mixed with Jack and Jim overwhelm my eardrums
My life and my insides rip apart in steady, painfully precise synchrony
My vision nothing but a blur as voices hover with all their taunting
'I told you so's and 'could have been's
Launch me across the universe and all those that lie parallel
And land me right back in this heaping pile of rubble and stinking sulfur
While I navigate through a maze of smoke and glass and shame
Wishing I could just close my eyes and wake up in the clouds...
Instead, I heave the door open with every ounce of effort I can muster
Stumbling out of the car in all my glory and refinement,
"Look what I've become!"
The miraculous walking product of yet another
Should-have-been-life-ending-mistake.
If only the forgiving earth would swallow me up where I stand
In one profound gulp
Or perhaps, in disdain, cast me into a gaping black hole
Shall I burst into a magnificent array of flames?
Or throw myself out of a perfectly good airplane
Conveniently forgetting my parachute?
I'm deliriously faded
Just like everyone else
..and no one else.
I'm sick with myself
I scarcely eat
Every muscle forgets how to relax
Or what a day without a hundred stabbing, venomous knives feels like
I try to resume my functioning in every day life; a feigned attempt of normalcy
All the while, every passing car is yet another ostensible tomb
I can't see outside of myself anymore.
I'm lost in a vast ocean of failure, misery and burnt-out hope
No one casts out a steady lifeline
I'm not sure I could grab a hold of it if someone did
I lack the strength, the courage; the spirit I once had...
..to keep fighting
Like military drones standing reluctantly in line preparing to salute
My eyes are glued to the road yet they reflect nothing but a hollow void;
A seemingly more desirable destination than my own chamber of dread
I'm miles away in that bastard land of make-believe
Where I won't have to drink to numb the pain corroding my heart
Won't have to sedate my pounding brain and crumbling sense of self
A place where the torment just sort of...
..drifts away with the burning clouds at sunset
Then all too quickly the sound of metal crushing, twisting, contorting
Pain and despair mixed with Jack and Jim overwhelm my eardrums
My life and my insides rip apart in steady, painfully precise synchrony
My vision nothing but a blur as voices hover with all their taunting
'I told you so's and 'could have been's
Launch me across the universe and all those that lie parallel
And land me right back in this heaping pile of rubble and stinking sulfur
While I navigate through a maze of smoke and glass and shame
Wishing I could just close my eyes and wake up in the clouds...
Instead, I heave the door open with every ounce of effort I can muster
Stumbling out of the car in all my glory and refinement,
"Look what I've become!"
The miraculous walking product of yet another
Should-have-been-life-ending-mistake.
If only the forgiving earth would swallow me up where I stand
In one profound gulp
Or perhaps, in disdain, cast me into a gaping black hole
Shall I burst into a magnificent array of flames?
Or throw myself out of a perfectly good airplane
Conveniently forgetting my parachute?
I'm deliriously faded
Just like everyone else
..and no one else.
I'm sick with myself
I scarcely eat
Every muscle forgets how to relax
Or what a day without a hundred stabbing, venomous knives feels like
I try to resume my functioning in every day life; a feigned attempt of normalcy
All the while, every passing car is yet another ostensible tomb
I can't see outside of myself anymore.
I'm lost in a vast ocean of failure, misery and burnt-out hope
No one casts out a steady lifeline
I'm not sure I could grab a hold of it if someone did
I lack the strength, the courage; the spirit I once had...
..to keep fighting
Literature
Who Knew
The curtain's close, and the colors fade.
Made holes around my faith. It's the day.
My dying day. You and I no longer speak
Of dreams we've come to make.
who knew it came to this
The fires breath only seem warmer the night before.
When the shady trees came together to watch the ties
Form around our souls. For both of us to hold.
The dew drips on our moon drop pallet's.
It tickles our toes and our tenderness begins
To show. Such a fickle moment. Such a dire
Time spending on a thread about to break.
who knew it would.
We embrace and part ways, only to rise
With the sun and yet again become one.
who knew we wouldn't.
The basking
Literature
The Moonfolk
We will gather expectance in drops of light
(thus it was said, "their eyes always were tearful")
And pick seashells to make necklaces,
So they too will witness Sun's daily defeat.
We will wait the fall of the last petal, beacon for our kin
(thus it was said, "their soul always was like the Elves' one")
And with its dying warmth rekindle we will, the passions
Of which the echo never gets completely lost.
We will bottle the cries of this era, with night's blessing on the skin
(thus it was said, "theirs was the last clan of the Moonfolk")
And save the dancing, we will leave it
To the elegant flames that so fast will come.
Literature
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i was going to ask you to hold back my hair
if i started to heave
but it's cut in mourning
for the fawns dying under the chalky
moist hands of children,
in mourning for newspaper print
threatening suicide off the tips of your eyelashes,
saying things like
i could fall faster
i could convert more
i could shine my face brighter than your sands
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What catches me write of the bat is the language you use. It's so sophistacted! It let's you know that this is not just another "woe is me" poem.
The visualization for this comes easy, because you have set it up properly and well enough that it leaves an impact on the reader. I still see myself driving down the road and passing faceless people.
I love how you show that she's almost musing over the concept of suicide, which so adds to the tone of the piece. I absolutely adore it.
and the subject matter is normal and relateable, in all sense, average, but you still make it profound.
Absolutely beautiful <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />